There sprawled a wyrm of icing
Stretching lengths of coils chill,
On its breath a storm enticing,
to crawl beneath the stony hill.
Then came the cold of winter's bite,
To lay upon a heavy frost,
That caused the wind to blow in spite
And howl like souls long lost.
Now all the land lay covered,
Buried in cold white snow;
While overhead there hovered
Gray clouds lying low.
This icy wyrm had come to stay;
The eternal storm had broke at last.
Now in terror the people lay,
Condemning summer to the past.
Their world is frozen, cold and dark;
Their future just as pale and bleak.
No light is there, no fire spark-
It preys upon the weak...
Death comes slowly creeping
Though they try to fight.
Cold forever always seeping
With the wyrm at night.
But stirring in the depths of earth
A creature slowly comes awake;
Bringing a force of terrible worth,
For a battle it has come to make.
Made of molten golden red,
It faced the cold with fire;
Upon the icy chill it fed,
Stoking up its burning ire.
Opening wide its fiery maw
It ate the cold, cold wyrm;
setting forth a melting thaw--
Spring grabbed a hold so firm.
Now the people all came out,
Rejoicing in the warmth and sun;
But seeing the creature, gave a shout
And for the hills did they run.
With a flash of red and gold
The creature made a slow retreat;
Its bones so tired and so old,
Its hunger sated, no more could it eat.
And so the world resumed its course,
Seasons following one another;
No more raging battles of force,
Except for those of the Nature Mother.














Comments
Quite enchanting!
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finish your pea professor
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Hey look, a signature!
I was feeling in the mood to write something a little more "epic"...
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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
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Poetry should please by a fine excess and not by singularity. It should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost as a remembrance.
-John Keats
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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
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He drew a circle that shut me out --
Heretic, rebel, a thing to flout.
But love and I had the wit to win:
We drew a circle that took him in.
It ate the cold, cold wyrm;", but the overall tone was powerful. I got the feeling that, instead of people, the poem spoke of the plants which die come every winter.
As I said, quite powerful. You've some skill at this poetry babble. Some skill indeed.
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Imagination is more important than knowledge--Albert Einstein.
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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
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