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There sprawled a wyrm of icing
Stretching lengths of coils chill,
On its breath a storm enticing,
to crawl beneath the stony hill.                                                
Then came the cold of winter's bite,
To lay upon a heavy frost,
That caused the wind to blow in spite
And howl like souls long lost.

Now all the land lay covered,
Buried in cold white snow;
While overhead there hovered
Gray clouds lying low.

This icy wyrm had come to stay;
The eternal storm had broke at last.
Now in terror the people lay,
Condemning summer to the past.
Their world is frozen, cold and dark;
Their future just as pale and bleak.
No light is there, no fire spark—-
It preys upon the weak...

Death comes slowly creeping
Though they try to fight.
Cold forever always seeping
With the wyrm at night.

But stirring in the depths of earth
A creature slowly comes awake;
Bringing a force of terrible worth,
For a battle it has come to make.
Made of molten golden red,
It faced the cold with fire;
Upon the icy chill it fed,
Stoking up its burning ire.

Opening wide its fiery maw
It ate the cold, cold wyrm;
setting forth a melting thaw--
Spring grabbed a hold so firm.

Now the people all came out,
Rejoicing in the warmth and sun;
But seeing the creature, gave a shout
And for the hills did they run.
With a flash of red and gold
The creature made a slow retreat;
Its bones so tired and so old,
Its hunger sated, no more could it eat.

And so the world resumed its course,
Seasons following one another;
No more raging battles of force,
Except for those of the Nature Mother.
©2009 ~3Fangs
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Author's Comments

This is still sort of a rough poem--I would like to make some changes sometime. But here it is, if any of you would like to read it! :aww:

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:iconhostage-fiver:
Aww, it's like one of those bard stories :aww:
Quite enchanting!

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finish your pea professor
:iconthejenjineer:
Reading the first few stanzas reminded me why I hate winter so much! You described my hatred for it quite well. :)

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Hey look, a signature!
:icon3fangs:
Thank you very much! :thanks:

I was feeling in the mood to write something a little more "epic"...=)

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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
:icon3fangs:
I know what you mean! I may enjoy winter to a degree--but I don't like it when it gets THAT cold. :XD: Brrr! *shivers* It was fun to try and come up with words to describe the proper temperature.

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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
:iconduscamei:
You should cultivate this lovely writing skill you have! It's always a pleasure to read your pieces. :aww:

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Poetry should please by a fine excess and not by singularity. It should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts, and appear almost as a remembrance.
-John Keats
:icon3fangs:
Thank you so very much! :huggle:

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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)
:icontztokflup:
That was really lovely to read, thankyou =)

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He drew a circle that shut me out --
Heretic, rebel, a thing to flout.
But love and I had the wit to win:
We drew a circle that took him in.
:iconjnels:
Wow, very, very nice. Yes, there were a couple of rougher patches, particularly "Opening wide its fiery maw
It ate the cold, cold wyrm;", but the overall tone was powerful. I got the feeling that, instead of people, the poem spoke of the plants which die come every winter.

As I said, quite powerful. You've some skill at this poetry babble. Some skill indeed. :nod:

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Imagination is more important than knowledge--Albert Einstein.
:icon3fangs:
No, no, thank YOU for reading! :hug:

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"I'm not antisocial, I just don't like people." --Truby. (My own character.)

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